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05-17-2008, 06:07 PM
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Originally Posted by JonPop I'm going to put this story aside for awhile. I have taken a big spurt of busy.
I will submit another story already written, about Sir Stud, (Maurice) and Lady Jennifer to give you something new to read while I am gone. JP | Take your time, JP. In the meantime, we'll be eagerly awaiting. |
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05-24-2008, 01:53 PM
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| Mr Yeap had a harrowing journey to the castle. Even in the dark of night, he had to hide many times to avoid the roving bands of rogue Knights. In the over 30 kilometers he had to travel by foot, he had seen many, many farms and fields laid waste and many bodies still lying where they had fallen.
Even at the walls of the city he was afraid to call out, for fear that he would be seen. He spotted a guard on the wall, picked up a rock and threw it, striking just below where the guard was standing. The guard peered into the darkness and said, "Who is there?"
Mr Yeap, trying not to talk louder than he had to, said, "It is I, John Yeap, from the Yeap farms. I must speak with the King." The guard said, "How do I know it is you and not a trap?"
Mr Yeap decided at great risk to himself, that he would light a handful of dried grass to illuminate his face.
The King was very sorry to hear about the death of Mr. Yeaps sons and although he knew that the supplies from outside the city walls had dwindled in the last few weeks, he was shocked to hear the reason. It had been days since the King had sent patrols to scout out the enemy and he halted these, when they didn't return.
Prince Robert was being tutored by Sir Sonic. He was very bright, listened and put into practice what he was learning. He had moved far ahead of all in his class and had surprised even Sir Sonic, with his skill.
The three weeks of training had eliminated a great portion of the young trainees, these men were sent to the Captain of the archers to be taught the ways of the bow.
There were surprisingly, over 100 men still learning the skills that would enable them to become Knights.
King Robert made an announced visit to the compound to meet with the Knights. The trainees stood in perfect formation, with the Knights standing at attention in front. All were in their armor and made a great impression on the King.
The King spoke in a voice loud enough to be heard by all and said, "I have grave news. The supplies from our province have been stopped by Chung. The people in this city are demanding to know when they will be able to receive food.
I have brought a former Knight, Mr. Yeap before you to tell you something he observed as he watched his two sons killed by Chungs Knights. Please Mr. Yeap, speak loudly so that all may hear."
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05-31-2008, 01:37 PM
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| Mr. Yeap looked over the assembled young men resplendent in their new armor and could feel a lump forming in his throat. He choked this back and said, "My Sons were the age that the most of you are now, I had great hopes that one day they would be standing proud, as you are now, training to become Knights for the Kingdom of Robert, but alas my young champions, the evil Chung has robbed me and my Sons of our dream. This said, I will now address the Knights from the far world.
Sir JonPop, Sir Remek and your champion, Sir Sonic, indeed all of you before me, your names have spread throughout the lands of the Kingdom of Robert. The tales you have told these young men and your adventures are now fabled stories. This has not escaped the notice of Chung and he has prepared a mighty horde to do battle.
We have on the World of Nib, a creature called, the Lion Raptor. This creature is devious and cunning. It hunts in threes and Chung has adopted this tactic. I observed this first hand at the Yeap Farms,.
I think that Chung was waiting for the right opportunity to use this.
My Sons had been practice jousting and were in full armor when his Knights struck.
My Sons were probably at the stage of training that all of these fine young men are now. They managed to kill two of Chungs Knights with their lance when they were struck from both sides by two other Knights and felled to the ground. I only saw the six Knights as I think Chung was observing this tactic. They were then, beaten to death, unmercifully.
Chung, now has many, many mounted Knights and my belief is that he would gladly trade one Knight killed to defeat each of you. I do not believe however, that his Knights are anywhere near the caliber of men I see before me, as my Sons easily defeated the opponent facing them and would have been able to defeat the others as well had they not been blind sided. I bring you this observation so that you might plan a way to counter this. God bless the Kingdom of Robert, and all of you here, that you might prevail."
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06-08-2008, 04:11 PM
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| Man, gotta get back to writing. Just been busy as hell, fire season is here and have been clearing brush and weeds from around my home. I have 2 1/2 acres and all the rain we had just made everything get out of hand. I will get back to the story soon. JP
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06-24-2008, 06:57 PM
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| The Knights from Earth had learned a trick or two and decided to test the Knights of Chung, first hand.
King Robert was anxious to learn the fate of his surrounding farms and small hamlets and approved the Knights plans.
In the training arena, they had simulated Chungs tactics using their battle square.
When a student Knight would charge at them from the front, they would stop and turn in all four directions.
No one attacking from either side was able to get through.
The Knights from Earth, felt that the students weren't quite ready yet, as their armor had no protection from the arrows of Chungs archers and decided that they would go on a probing mission alone, to test their new tactic.
This was to be an early morning expedition, while the sun was at their backs.
The Knights had not traveled more than three kilometers when they came to the first of the ravaged farms.
The early morning sun cast eerie shadows over the burnt landscape and what remained of farm houses and outbuildings. The wind was still and there were no sounds. They could smell the unmistakable odor of death as they got closer.
The Knights looked at each other and nodded, all felt the presence of something about to happen.
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07-22-2008, 02:15 PM
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| Ahead on the road, about 1/2 kilometer, the Knights could see sunlight glinting off armor and shields.
They could also see, that riders were turning in, to attack them from the flanks.
It was hard to estimate the numbers of the enemy because of the distance, but they figure they were outnumbered by at least ten to one. Sir JonPop smiled at this and turned in his saddle and said, "Well, my brothers, it's time to put our plan into action."
The Knights formed their battle square and started slowly up the road towards Chung and his Knights.
They were judging the speed of the flankers and at a certain point, they formed into a single front and with a mighty yell, charged at the center of the enemy.
This totally caught the enemy off guard because they had been informed by their spies that the Knights from Earth would stay in their battle square and Chung had devised a tactic that he thought would defeat this.
The Knights from the Kingdom of BetterMan and the PE Gym, hit the center of the line with such force that they had succeeded in dismounting or killing at least 20 of Chungs men.
They turned and with broadsword and mace, begin to destroy those that were still within reach.
The flankers had not yet made their turn and were, at the moment, no threat. The Knights from Earth had turned their backs on Chungs archers and they were firing arrows into their own ranks, killing or wounding many of their own Knights.
Sir Remek felt many arrows glance of his armor and the back of his helmet and once again, said a silent thank you to Sir Merlin. The deflected arrows were taking their toll on Chungs foot soldiers and Chung ordered the archers to stop firing. As the flanking enemy Knights were about to turn in to attack, they were hit from the rear by the more than 100 student Knights.
Unbeknownst to King Robert and to the student Knights until the last minute, Sir Jon Pop and all of the Knights, including Big Al, the captain of the trainees and Prince Rob had spent many hours in their meeting room with doors tightly sealed going over a plan that he and the Knights had devised. He knew that Chung had spies, it was just a matter of common sense. This is why they practiced over and over in their battle square with the students and had announced to King Robert in open court, that this was the plan that they would use to defeat Chung.
The Knights of Chungs army had begun to scatter and the trainee Knights in battle squares, had quickly broken the flankers into small groups and were dispatching them with lance and broadsword.
Sir JonPop saw that Sir Bret had been knocked from his horse and was in hand to hand combat with a very large knight. He goaded his horse into a gallop and with a mighty swing with his mace, made short work of the helmet and head of the man.
The foot soldiers and archers had turned tail and were leaving in Droves, running for their lives.
There were now many fights on the ground, but the overpowering skill of the Knights from Earth and the training they had drilled into the young Knights, soon proved too much and the remaining Knights of Chung beat a hasty retreat. Sir JonPop had to yell at Sir Sonic and Sir Stillwantmore, to break off the fight and to not chase the fleeing men.
Where there had been bedlam and noise with the sounds and fury of the battle, there now was quiet, except for the moaning and cries of the wounded.
Many dead Knights littered the ground, soldiers were scattered, dead or wounded.
Chung's Knights' horses, were laying dead, many killed by their own archers, or the wounded horses were being put down by the Young Knights.
Sir Remek looked at the rear of his horse and saw many arrows that were still working their way out of the flesh and again marveled at such a beast. The battlefield was littered with parts of armor and weapons.
Sir JonPop sent about half of the young Knights back to the castle to bring wagons and physicians to tend to the wounded and had his men begin to round up the prisoners that could still walk.
The Knights searched for Chung amongst the dead and surmised that he had escaped.
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08-17-2008, 05:21 PM
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| There was much commotion back at the quarters of the Knights, they had some nicks and bruises they had to tend to and all were wanting a soak bath and a massage from their attendants.
Sir JonPop said, "Well so much for being just advisors and recruiters, but it's been a long time since the spammer war and damn, it felt good to get that adrenalin rush again."
Sir Stud added, "Yea man, that was almost as good as my girls pussy."
Everyone laughed loudly at that, except Sir Kingpole, who grabbed his side.
Sir Kingpole had managed to lean away from a spiked mace swung at his head, but took the blow to his side. This left a large dent in his armor and what he felt, might be broken ribs.
The Knights wanted a count of the trainees because they had heard by rumor that 3 had been killed and several wounded. They all went to their individual rooms and their girls helped remove their armor.
The Court physician was called to check the damage to the Knights. He found only some minor cuts and bruises and left healing potions with the attendants. Sir Kingpole was indeed diagnosed with a cracked
8th, rib, was instructed to bathe and he would be back in 30 minutes to wrap his ribs.
Sir Kingpole's girl was a beautiful honey blond. He didn't know why, but she reminded him of someone from his past that he had been very fond of in fact, had considered marrying.
In Sir Bret's room his girl was carefully applying healing salve to his slight cuts and a large bruise on his right arm. At 5' 10", she stood almost as tall as Sir Bret and when he looked at her, he saw a taller version of Princess Jennifer Thunder. His heart would skip a little beat every time he looked into her face.
Unbeknownst to the Knights, when they had been in hyper sleep, not only were they learning the language of Nib, but their very thoughts were being read. These attendants had been carefully selected to fill a deep need in each Knight and fulfill their desires with comfort and care. It would have been impossible for any of the Knights to reject their chosen girl. They were a product of the deep subconscious.
Of course this was never revealed to the Knights, as they would have felt extremely violated.
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08-17-2008, 06:45 PM
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Rep Power: 13   | So do I have to wait until my rib heals to get laid by blondie? After all I don't mind being on the bottom. She sounds like a hottie I will wait if I have to. ehehehehe! |
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08-17-2008, 07:01 PM
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| I thought you'd like that, getting wounded in battle stuff. Your girl will do anything that you feel up to. Lie back, try not to tense up when you have a resounding orgasm when she gives you a tender blow-job. It hurts broken ribs if you do that. I know.
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08-17-2008, 08:32 PM
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Originally Posted by JonPop I thought you'd like that, getting wounded in battle stuff. Your girl will do anything that you feel up to. Lie back, try not to tense up when you have a resounding orgasm when she gives you a tender blow-job. It hurts broken ribs if you do that. I know. | Perhaps I should hurry up and mend first. |
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